After the Net Has Been Drawn
She’s all invective, hesitation.
Hooked to her aphasia
like an incomplete albacore.
The way her pale marbled skin
invited the gaff and then rejected
it’s piercing draw toward ice.
There is no recovery from this.
There will be only the deep
into which, the sharkbit
living corpse is tossed
nonchalant and remebered
then to swim limping away.
Only acceptance now
a lifting into new selfsame
wholeness. Her, no longer
shining star of the sea.
Pieced together in this new
recognizable school, still
she writes her name in blue
light shafts splitting into greens.
Way down there in her eyes
there is the spark like glint
of a new coin from the bottom
of an abandoned brackish well.
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only tender leaves
on
the same old
twisted branches…
I love a number of the lines! The last image is stunning.
“she writes her name in blue
light shafts splitting into greens”
The last image is stunning — “abandoned brackish well.” Wow.
Beautiful, Coleman. I love your vision of Linda as changed but essentially the same, her essence undiminished. That’s the way I see her too.
wow, just amazing. That last stanza shines like your coin and your Linda.
I admire the surprising freshness of the metaphor
Coleman, I very flattered and love reading about me. But I think people might get fired of reading about my stroked out self. Ha! Maybe you switch some names up. You could write about Wanda or Shirley.
I meant tired also fired is an interesting typo.
Lol…….I love you 🙂 I’ll change it up
I just wanted to a
Make sure some.of these were filed away where I can’t burn them 🙂
Beautiful, thanks for sharing!
selfsame wholeness pieced together
and yes: writes her name in blue light shafts splitting into greens! that must put her in the shining star camp…
Love all of this, but the second stanza really grabbed me.
Such a loving tribute beautifully written
The phrase “hooked to her aphasia like an incomplete albacore” stuck with me.