After the Reading **
A whisper of twilight past
Kentucky bluegrass, the horse
park, fences, hedges. The high-
way fast dark when the rain started.
Smartfood and chocolate Fairlife
for late dinner at the nearest Love
stop. Outside Lexington, the highway lights
farther & farther apart, the rain harder
and harder. Down to 55 and hazards.
Trucks on the shoulder and me up
against the wheel. My last nerve
shatters when the wheels feel
like they’re levitating above the asphalt.
Pulled off at the Waffle House parking
lot, I call home. Check my phone.
See Elizabeth’s picture outside
The Kenwick Table. It was still
light & we were beaming. I turn
off the wipers & wait out the storm,
scrolling through the deluge.
**Even though this is dated 6/6, I started it at ten minutes before mdn! It took me SO long to get home!
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Sounds like a moment to always remember and a perfect storm to reflect the poetry of it.
Yes!
Been in storms like these. Love how you build the tension:
when the rain started
farther & farther apart, the rain harder
and harder. Down to 55 and hazards.
Trucks on the shoulder and me up
against the wheel
levitating above the asphalt.
It was terrifying! Pulling off was the smartest thing I’ve done in a long time.
I thought about you when I woke up to the thunder at 10:00 pm. I’ve been on that stretch of highway so many times in major downpours. The poem takes me straight to white knuckles on the steering wheel. Glad you made it home safe.
It was SO dark on those stretches in between highway lights. So frightening!
Oh, Ellen! I love the sounds in this poem – trying to make something positive about the experience. And I’m glad you made it home safely!
Thanks, Nancy!
I can really feel the tension in this piece–well-done!
I feel the white knuckles and have certainly been there. Just about the same time, different road.
Every bit of that storm (was there for it on the way back to the Ville) in your poem was so real I was rooting for you. I am glad to have met you, and glad you stopped! Wonderful poem.