Aftertaste
I wanted to write a poem about the solstice
but the tongues of twilight—
flap of umbrous bats & staccato
creak of spotted tree frogs—
urged me out by the pond
where the white lilies
waited & water
hyacinths waded,
their feathery roots
waving just
below surface.
I wanted to capture the violet moments
before the velvet cape
of night draped itself
over copse & cloud,
limb & vetch,
bird’s eye
& blade.
I wanted to tell you that this longest
day leaves an aftertaste
of lavender & plum
in my mouth even
as January falls
hard as steel
brittle as brass
around me.
8 thoughts on "Aftertaste"
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What lush first two stanzas!
Thank you!
Such a lovely poem.
What luscious words and combinations!
Thanks, All!
The first time I lingered over an aftertaste-your use of colors, nature are great in this poem. Thank you!
Thanks, Cleo!
Like the structure, TMT, and the way the last stanza offers a turn! Great imagery!