All These Old Girls
We grown women now with memories
of hazy slat porches
culverts, purple martin haylofts,
rows of peonies, summer gliders
cigarettes shaky over coffee cups
utility lights on posts coming on
in the gloaming. There was no day
not given to wonder
cisterns scalded them soft baby legs
holding onto old horse manes
full of sweat and chiggers
blackberry scratches and low mud ponds
Tell me, when you remember
nights of slow moving air and
the laughter of adults winding out
under mimosa trees
do you say, I would give a dozen
tomorrows for one day of that spirea bush,
flagstones along a rural route
or do you say, give me wisdom to understand
the dark matter we all resign ourselves to?
A turkey buzzard pokes at the belly
of a dead box turtle on the asphalt,
then sails over Twin Creek,
singing as it wings:
This is you
This is it
This is now
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I find this poem rather thrilling. The powerful Zenlike ending is very rewarding too. So many good word groupings. Here’s one I love….
full of sweat and chiggers
blackberry scratches and low mud ponds
PS. Hi Liz! I hope now the pandemic more manageable I hope to see you in person at some point.
Thank you Linda for your findings. I hope we can get together too this summer sometime.
I love this !
An unromanticized animal death is the perfect way to end a poem about the brutality of time. Glorious. Especially love the slow-moving air and adult laughter under the mimosa tree. ❤️
Oh, you had me at gliders. I can never forget mamaw’s. Then understanding “the dark matter” gives it teeth. Awesome.
Very, very nice
LOVE this imagery…and can relate to it all.
YAY LP
There was no day
Not given to wonder
Love your imagery.
Woof, so much delicious imagery. I’m savoring it.
Beautiful– Had me from here:
We grown women now with memories
of hazy slat porches
I like the stream of consciousness of this and bold nature images and how it blends into thoughts and scenes! Bravo poet!