American Sentence LIV
The train barrels across blank landscape, rumbling a poet’s thoughts athwart.
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The train barrels across blank landscape, rumbling a poet’s thoughts athwart.
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I love the simplicity and relevance of your work. Glad the sentences are back.
Me too !
Happy June and perfect for day 1. Singsinging “all aboard”
Perfect epitome of conciseness and imagery!
Happy to be reading your work again this year! You have the gift of weighing every word.
Oh . . . what’s coming next, Pam???
It captures the writing experience!
Ah, yes! And so we begin!
Love the “thoughts athwart.” Can’t wait to read more of these.
Back to the American sentences! Love it!
Thanks for riding the train, y’all! Your comments are encouraging and bring me great delight! I continue to be surprised each day when I sit on the train and watch the passengers already and newly boarded, settling in and showing a hint of themselves.
I LOVE these American sentences…just getting to a place to catch up on my reading and these are SO vivid. Little shots of life. Thank you.
I’d been skipping around and decided to go back to the beginning and what an auspicious start!