American Sentence LX
The man turns from the world he cannot join, from the child he cannot see.
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The man turns from the world he cannot join, from the child he cannot see.
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I think adding the innocent figure “the child” in this sentence made it very poignant. Nice write!
all that’s left is to pause and ponder. Thanks
This sounds like a turn to me!
A beginning of a beautiful novel!
Mysterious and intriguing.
Ah, lots of interpretations but each one filled with a certain somberness. Well done.
You’ve noe only peopled the train with good characters, but are weaving a set of stories that intrigues us!
Ah, such poignancy! You’ve been busy, and I must backtrack. I love this one!
Enjoying this series! Evocative.
The two “froms” lead me to wonder to what is he is turning.
And that may be what he is wondering too.
Such deep reflection in just a few words. well done
Oh, that feels tragic. So much emotion in one line!
A complete story in one sentence! Perfect