American Sentence XLVIII
Not one passenger saw the bird, but all heard his thin, sweet, high-pitched notes.
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Not one passenger saw the bird, but all heard his thin, sweet, high-pitched notes.
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Engaging title. &, the use of “passengers” gives this reader lots to wonder about this poem.
Thanks, Kim!
So good
the movement of “passenger”
the bird not seen but Heard!
you really make this form work
Thanks, Jim! The form has helped me tune words well!
Very nice – I wonder if it’s a bird Greg heard in Rome???
ahhh, the Friar on the train did, so perhaps so 🙂