An Invitation
Come, sit. With me, you are
welcome though your tears
make you feel pushed aside
by the world. What have they
told you? To dry your eyes?
Chin up? Power through? No,
pain is a prophet. Trust it
like your own mother’s
voice, like your own heart.
Hold out your sorrow to me.
Let us pause here, reverent,
as we would watch the stars.
Feel now the weight
of your grief in your soft
hands, see how the light
hits it, wait as it builds
and then recedes again.
We are keeping holy vigil
over the quiet deaths
we face each day.
Shame has no place
here. Let’s follow the tide
of our pain. Who knows
where we might wash up?
Bruised and battered, gulping
in precious new breaths so sharp
and bright, they are almost laughter.
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I like how you approached and then ended this poem, nice write!
I really enjoyed this perspective on the importance of shedding tears and sharing emotions.
A very calming, uplifting poem. Absolutely lovely.
There is…considerable beauty in vulnerability, to be emotionally naked with another person. And I adore the natural progression of the poem. “Pain is a prophet…let’s follow the tide of our pain.” So incredibly wonderful!
So many of yours begin or end at the shore (if I remember from years gone by); your words and particular viewpoint are returning, and welcomed, waves!
So very true:
pain is a prophet. Trust it
like your own mother’s
voice, like your own heart.
Feel now the weight
of your grief in your soft
hands, see how the light
hits it, wait as it builds
and then recedes again.
I agree – the third stanza is perfect. Thanks!
Poetic therapy!
pain is a prophet. Wonderful insight
Pain is ,indeed, a prophet. Well done…