An Old Woman’s Blason
An Old Woman’s Blason
Exposed to the full length mirror they stand,
half-assed erect, not round, firm or full,
nor voluptuous or succulent, they sag.
Both beg— lift us with cupped palms, sop moisture
beneath folds of soft skin, ease gravity’s
pull on pectorals, be the support we need.
Simultaneously gnarled fingers pinch
two tips, feel hardness in response to tweaks.
Manual manipulation raises
their southbound projection, fights the grave’s pull.
Headlights momentarily realigned
I’m blinded by a beauty no one sees.
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I like the tone, one of candid realism mixed with a touch of defiance at the end. I thought it was a masterful touch shifting the mood from a somber acceptance of aging to a celebration of unseen beauty, well done!
Love the closing lines. You balance seriousness and humor so well.
The beauty of aging is blinding indeed. We see what we don’t want to see, and we don’t see the most beautiful parts of ourselves.
I enjoyed this glimpse in the (my) mirror.
“Be the support we need” – I love this line!
Love the ending! Good poem Cathy!
I love exposed in the first line, ending with blinded in the last.
You bring both wisdom and wit to your writing, Cathy–well done!
Love it!!!!