Anaerobic
Counted the space between your longest breaths
the flame would eventually consume.
Played the role of spectator to death
sitting in its transient room.
Fell powerless with the torch re-lit,
the weight of it, a fiery hurt
but waited for inevitable ash to sit
then approached with a heart full of dirt.
A lesson laid out in division physics
pure revelation pounded into earth;
the best way to stop a phoenix,
bury it before its birth.
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then approached with a heart full of dirt.
You can do better with this line, I think. It reads clunky
The rest I found very powerful, thanks
Philip, I thought the poem was awesome!
Fantastic!