another furious-true
the rolling showed devotion-
cries of delirious
fury
fell into ‘the faith’
his theory of taking
two and two
a line of blue silk-
less than those who
lived
the sound which darkness
passes into-
pushing north
many had-
and had
still in detailed time
but he finds their heart
in cages
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more erasure from a 1905 arts magazine.
There are ghosts of reference here that punch this poem through.
Little twists and gouging like an awl through leather.
And the overknot tugs it tight.
Yes, tight.
” but he finds their heart
in cages”
This is good , very good.
(still feels about 40% unresolved to me, but wanted to get it out of the notebook… to see it’s legs in print…)
still picking at this little pile of bones. haha
true to its tit
tilth & title
!!!!!
tilth… now THERE’s a horny word.. 🙂
Love the stanza about “the sound” and also how unfinished it feels (though I could see where that’s frustrating for you).
hate to admit it, but i think it needs some periods… 🙁
Periods are the enemy. Never forget that. Period.
like little pinholes-letting all the light leak out
Awaken, my trypophobia
Not sure I follow this but I feel you’re onto something here.
Nice:
the sound which darkness
passes into-
pushing north