Anticipation of a Summer Storm
The air is thick and lazy.
All day it’s grown hotter
baking into my skin,
smothering like a wool blanket
pressing me into a lethargic lull
melted right into my rocker.
By afternoon, I see clouds rise up like
forgotten dough over hills in the distance
until thunder cracks over the hum of the AC,
leaves turn up on trees, and
I smell rain in the air
as crisp as an ocean breeze
brushing through the porch railing
gaining speed with each blackened cloud,
kissing my face with the promise of relief.
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Yes!!! You capture these moments perfectly!
“By afternoon, I see clouds rise up like
forgotten dough over hills in the distance
until thunder cracks over the hum of the AC,”
Incredible descriptions!
Agree: After reading this poem, I can’t help but pay more attention to the gradual changes building up to the storm. (For that, however, I’d have to move out to the porch.) I love the unusual “clouds rise up like / forgotten dough”
Beautiful- I’m reading this while a storm is breaking over my house- you’ve captured it perfectly!
I love the oppressiveness of the heat—the lethargic feeling of time moving slow until real anticipation is verfied with a kiss from an ocean breeze—-your experience as a living barometer. Wonderful!
I love these images! “like/forgotten dough” = wow!
Wow. That image:
I see clouds rise up like
forgotten dough
What suspense and anticipation!
I not only smell the rain, I smell the forgotten dough!