Underneath, Ants
Underneath my apartment building’s spreading oak,
ants busy: dissecting worm into neat segments.
Their path is defined by scent and memory.
Sure, the landscape changes (the contracted land-
scaper changes for his living), but the ants disregard
beheaded peaks and cleaved grass. Ants build new doors,
consume, carry oak leaves over their heads.
Each rain is a flood, and still either they hold
the same close path, or frenzy. It’s as if nothing changed–
because ain’t it always been the same?
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love this line:
Their path is defined by scent and memory
Thank you, Tania Horne!
“Each rain is a flood” is a hefty and fantastic line. I adore this
Thanks, Nollie Palmer!
I like how the poem is local and universal (the way an ancient city is built on top of its forerunner). The “spreading oak” is deceptively protective. The informal last line underscores the inevitability.
Thanks, Dr. Bedetti. I think “the way an ancient city is built on top of its forerunner” is a great line itself!
I like how you write from the world view of the ant
Thank you, Pat Owen 🙂
Excellent! “Their path is defined by scent and memory” and “beheaded peaks and cleaved grass” are my favorite lines.
Glad you enjoyed, thanks Karen George!
Very Nice. Some great lines, and I like your images.
Thank you so much!