Ars Poetica With A Ditch Run Through It
This poem begins where the ditch forgets its name—
becomes creek and then river. Begins
in the soft shush of a compressor’s next breath,
in the crawlspace crack beneath this very brick apartment.
It wears no gold. Carries no saint’s remains.
It’s the wild onion stench on a spill of bent clover,
this poem that blooms where the ditch forgets its name.
It won’t come out in clean light. Prefers the lies
told by glow on a nicotine-stained sheet
while, outside, the ditch forgets its own name.
It maps what wants buried:
there is oxygen’s next complaint,
here is the rosebush grown, over–flowering
still in a tangled bramble
outside this very brick apartment.
The poem holds the silence of a shuttered country store
at midnight,
faint as hymn from a shuttered church. Holds still
where the ditch’s throat
forgets its name. Holds the crack.
Creates the frame.
Forgets its name.
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I’ve been enjoying these creek/river-themed poems you’ve written – potential chapbook theme? (Also, the title has a pretty great spin on ” A River Runs Through It,” given the theme you’re working with here! )
Thank you, Diana! I had “A River Runs Through It” on my mind too!
I really like the feeling of this and the refrain is cleansing and haunting, as though poetry were an ethereal force that, ever-replenishing, strangely elevates all. It feels like an anchor and an enigma. It feels like clay containing muttering gods. It feels both plain and exuberant, understated though as what was the very root, the wandering, weed-soft soul of beauty. Excellent.
*though tugging at what was the very root
Thank you so much, Goldie. I appreciate you!
Love this invite into the poem:
This poem begins where the ditch forgets its name—
becomes creek and then river.
and the echo of “the ditch forgets its name” throughout
Fav line: faint as hymn from a shuttered church.
Thank you, Pam!
A tour-de-force offering today, Shaun. Rich in detail. Hauntingly evocative. Love the image: “The poem holds the silence . . ./ . . ./faint as hymn from a shuttered church.”
Thank you so much! This was me attempting something villanelle-ish!
I love the notion of forgetting and forming/changing shape. What a gorgeous, haunting piece.
Thank you so much!
Such a strong poem, and I love the refrain, “the ditch forgets its name.” An amnesic way to describe the transition to a river. Great use of language.
Thank you, Lee!
I, too, hope there is a book coming soon, Shaun.
“It’s the wild onion stench on a spill of bent clover,” – I miss the smell of wild onion, especially when I was mowing!
“The poem holds the silence of a shuttered country store
at midnight,” – magic
Deft adjustments with the repetition and the off rhymes and rhythms are really sweet.
And everything they said. It makes me feel like its gonna be ok to be spilling out into something, I don’t know not bigger or better, just nit the same.
Again, Bravo.
I have to echo Pam and Coleman’s previous comments. The weaving of the line”where the ditch forgets its name” is marvelous. The images are both earthy and haunting.
I like all the bricklaying and construction related terms for poetry, such as “compressor,” crawlspace,” “crack,” “frame,” counterpoint with and frame the poem
I love Ars Poetica and can hear the gushing of the water as it elevates from ditch to creek to river. You let us know what each does not hold, and this adds to the mystery. Each stanza stirs up speculation. Perhaps a sequel?
such great images and words – a chapbook in the works
Perfect title. Love how the ditch weaves throughout the poem. So many unforgettable images.