As my computer shuts down
I sit on the edge of my bed,
my eyes closed, with the light
from the screen burned through
my eyelids, orange like the sun
against them, reflecting off the azure
water of Ocho Rios, named
for the eight rivers the Spanish found.
Words spin round and around
within my brain, untamed,
too free to be caught on the lure
my memory casts. As if the sun
sets beyond the horizon’s vast blue,
darkness separates me from the light
of creativity. My poem tugs, dives head-
long. I fall asleep in this small town.
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As my computer shuts down
I sit on the edge of my bed,
my eyes closed, with the light
from the screen burned through
my eyelids, orange like the sun
against them, reflecting off the azure
water of Ocho Rios, named
for the eight rivers the Spanish found.
Words spin round and around
within my brain, untamed,
too free to be caught on the lure
my memory casts. As if the sun
sets beyond the horizon’s vast blue,
darkness separates me from the light
of creativity. My poem tugs, dives head-
long. I fall asleep in this small town.
Memory casting a lure captures how it feels for me when I’m trying to find the right word.
Thanks, Gaby, for reading my words again and being the poet you are.
Love the fishing image of “the lure / my memory casts” and the mirroring image of “My poem tugs, dives head- / long.”
Thanks, Karen, for reading my words this year as you have in the past. You have hooked my respect.
‘light of the screen burned through’,
The reality of the poet’s world searching for the right words and held in thrall by today’s persistent interruptions.
Glad I found you–been looking for mtpoet. Enjoyed your work so much last year.
I love how the first stanza moves through the different images and there is a lot of good music here. Also enjoy the juxtaposition of the complementary colors, orange and blue.
Thank you J. K. for your reading eye…