at least once
order without
with no
or with
adding without
start
instead without
of with
add with
a pinch
of light
try with
now
lower with
then
below without
a small
amount with
may also
be with
all from
before
ask with
more down without
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Heck yeah!!!!!!!!
Mined gold !!!
This is an intriguing poem I tried reading it upside down and as a call and response. Is it an erasure? You write like a painter and are endlessly fascinating!
yes, this is erasure… i wanted to play with something that could be read or approached from a couple different angles..
i also wanted a dizzying level of addition and loss
Dizziness achieved!
in an uncertain sense
of witness vs. withoutness,
try again
with no…
Fascinating sir.
Had me spinning to see it too