At the Park
We come to the park to make phone calls
under the shade of trees carefully selected
by the Parks department.
Two women sit on a blanket talking,
oblivious to the multitude of children
playing on the shining merry go rounds
They make them flush with the ground now
Even still, a woman stands by
calling to her daughter,
That’s too fast Savannah!
Come over here and play on something else!
Teenagers survey the park
looking for one another,
or babysitting, I don’t know.
I’ve never known what teenagers were up to
even when I was one.
I push my children on the swings.
A scent wafts over me from
a little girl with a big yellow bow.
She smells of sunshine and shampoo.
Freshly cleaned, just to get dirty again.
The children are vibrant but after awhile
Just various arrangements of
holds a book so everyone can see the title: You
Are a Badass.
On the bench, a man calls out to his children
Would you like me to push you?
Do you want me to keep your backpack?
Why don’t you let me hold your paper?
He is asking the question we all have eventually
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Snapshot after snapshot what an amazing set of field notes.
I’ve never known what teenagers were up to
even when I was one.
(me too)
Wow, that ending!
The opening is so unexpected: going to the park to make phone calls – ! The details build and build until we reach the last stanza and that poignant punch of a final line – very nicely done!
I like this poem from start to finish. Being at the park is such a perfect setup for a poem. This is nicely arranged and really packs a punch.