Back Porch: Morning after the Debate
panoply of bird calls
a United Nations of song
combined under the canopy
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panoply of bird calls
a United Nations of song
combined under the canopy
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A prayer, maybe. We need it.
I’m surprised by how many peo
Whoops! I meant to say I’m surprised by how many people are commenting the debate. Your haiku directs us to the birds.
the debate was for the birds
your poem is for our souls
I particularly like what you did with
‘ panoply ‘ and ‘canopy’
It holds us in the song.
Agree with Coleman, brilliant placement of ‘ panoply ‘ and ‘canopy’. It holds us within the song and for me nature has always held hope. Good salve to the soul!
What Jim said!
Well said!
I love this breath of a reminder. Nature often knows much better.
Beautiful.
Really like the back porch setting with the birds singing.