Baitball
Overheated on the isolated pristine beach
of Anse Chasenet
I crawled out from under the bulky beach
umbrella abandoned the turquoise floppy
hat and shades
donned my snorkel mask
waltzed into the cool waves solo.
Thirty feet out and under
I saw it.
Miraculous underwater maelstrom
of tiny sardines out of the tin
circling in a a whir to escape
the big wahoo’s chomping jaws.
Always safety in numbers , mama said
Don’t travel alone at night
or you’ ll be prey
Shimmery silver fish abide this rule
Pulling tight as one
Swarming in a circular funnel.
Safety in numbers to ward off
perilous predators.
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Wonderful poem. Also – I got married at Anse Chastanet!
Outstanding, Linda! Great use of verbs and images. Lessons are everywhere if we look!
I love the way this poem took me into such a special moment. Thanks!
Not only does this poem have gorgeous imagery – I could see the whole scene – but it gives the reader great advice! Well done, Linda!!!
Thanks everyone!
Good narrative, good images, Linda. I especially like “waltzed into the cool waves solo.” And about our love of new words: I assumed “wahoo” would be your fun term for some big predator, but looked it up to make sure. Mackerel!
Rich contrast of going solo into the ocean and the advice of safety in numbers!