Before the Wedding: Dinner at Feast and Florets
We sit near the window. A bouquet on the table
previews the colors of the ceremony.
His family is caught in a downpour.
They bustle in a few minutes late,
his father wearing an umbrella, floppy hat
and jacket, his sister bringing her brother a new belt.
We share anticipation as well as a meal
of antipasti and steelhead trout. Nobody
has time to explore the greenhouse in the back.
His unruffled mother asks the tricky question
of us all: How do you feel? After the rain,
an alert server volunteers to snap a photo
of our new configuration, a realignment
of the future on the shiny pavement.
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I absolutely adore the attention to detail, the sizing up of the other family as they enter the restaurant. So human. And the unruffled mother’s question is another unexpected delight.
Love the last two lines! Having witnessed lots of weddings years back, the moments you capture here so well are very human moments!!
This poem is well done! I feel that I’m a part of the scene and focusing on the realignment really gives the scene focus.
Love this. I feel like I’m right there with you.
I agree with all of the above.
Your poets eye caught the details.
Thanks for sharing.
Very nicely done. The ending is so effective because it’s visual.
yes–
our new configuration, a realignment
of the future on the shiny pavement.
Love the details and form in this shared moment!
Every single line and word is so finely wrought and place together for ultimate impact.
Well-planned, well-polished.
Oh, the adaptations we make in every circle, every season.
Beautifully done.
You do such a wonderful job of detailing how families shift with each new addition. With all the wedding poems, I felt like I was there!!
That last line is a perfect denouement: you set it up so well in your precise and chosen details.
It always was the little things in this poem that grabbed me Gaby. “A bouquet on the table previews the colors of the ceremony.” Although I didn’t know the colors – I filled them in. Then how you saw the father, “wearing an umbrella, floppy hat” – so immensely comic, I laughed with delight. Weddings are embarrassing bunches of perfection, dream, and mishap – and from the beginning, to the food, to the bluntness of the mother!!!! It was wonderful.
I liked that you didn’t tell the colors! To be clear. Should have said!