Being the Story of a Couple, Cookin’ Up a Filipino Box Spring Hog
The couple tastes like grass and gasoline.
Party drinks, tea, line the gazebo rails—
ink black,
strangest the magazines flip to
pages containing hats,
and cords of rope sustaining two who
make love in pain under the weeping
black elms, toes torturous bent
like sacrificial doves, wings rent impossible,
back to front, folded back.
Then something slow a whimpering
called out a song, loud like dying.
A rhapsody. Neither knew from music,
or a skirt hung around knees
while roasted pig served with noodles
fed the group of carousers with largesse.
Of all nights, one night’s groaning call of yes.
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This line is right,
“called out a song,
loud like dying”.
That is a line …..dang !!
“called out a song, loud like dying.”
Every line a gem,
and the most vivid description
of love making.
Yeah!
That’s a helluva title! Funny and rendered was the concision. I do have laugh because your line reads like the couple is being eaten for dinner but I don’t think you mean it like that
Meant “rendered with concision.”
Building tension that finally releases at the end!
Perfect.
love:
called out a song, loud like dying.
Oh those “toes torturous bent”!
“One time, at band camp”
Sounds like a party to me.
Dang, Manny! I love the way this reads. Also: ” toes torturous bent/like sacrificial doves” is fantastic.