Beyond form And function
Pema says we’re suspended
Between dualities
Energy expended
On dreams and casualties
For each pleasure there’s pain
For each loss there’s gain
Counter to fame is shame
The pole of praise is blame
We find that true wisdom
Is knowing we can’t know
The space between atoms
Or the thoughts of fallen snow
A full life in each breath
Inhaling we’re reborn
Exhaling into death
Freedom comes when we scorn
The lie of certainty
We’re absolutely freed
From these dualities
Embracing righteousness
Doing what’s right despite
The expectations of those
Including ourselves
locked in a pattern,
needing resolution.
To be is all we need to be
Each moment, an eternal discovery
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Clever and wise poem. I love how you cycle back from rhymed to un-rhymed. I love that one tercet toward the end to show you aren’t locked in a pattern!
Thanks for the careful read!!
I have always been annoyed by the space between atoms, but what can you do. Suspended dualities. I think this is a poetry prompt lol thank you
Like they say don’t trust atoms, because they make up everything. Lol.
“A full life in each breath
Inhaling we’re reborn
Exhaling into death
Freedom comes when we scorn”
Absolutely. Such a great write!
Thank you, H.A.!
These lines caught my breath, exquisite:
“We find that true wisdom
Is knowing we can’t know
The space between atoms
Or the thoughts of fallen snow”
Thank you, Pam!
Yeah !!!! My wife was talking about this …..I live how this played out.
Using different schemes as if its broken quatrains and breaking and breaking patterns and it reads bottom to top as well and that speaks to concise intent and word selection. Bravo poet !!
Thank you, Coleman. I hadn’t thought to read it backwards. That gives me some ideas for more revision. Much appreciated!
Oh. I had to read this through several times—so much going on— so clever with form, with caps/non caps in the title, with line breaks . . .
Thank you, Michele! Glad you picked up on the caps and lowercase in the title 🙂