Black and Gold
Your poems, clutches of bright set gold
at the hardware store at twilight on Sunday.
I chose black at the store on Sunday.
Black my favorite—color of your hair.
My sweet, I never took black locks of your hair,
or conjured bonds locking our true small hands.
Lavish the secrets of your true small hands
which secretly reach the length of my leg.
You’re a cat, curled close comfy around my leg.
Smoke curling comfortable coming again.
I’ll smoke with you from time to time again,
Time our servant will never grow old.
From now, as you’re mine I’ll serve, ’til I’m old,
your poems, clutches of bright set gold.
17 thoughts on "Black and Gold"
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Form works!
Title rocks.
Sord of hard and silky.
Second stanza is personal favorite.
And the repetition works.
Great write poet.
I appreciate the balance in form in this piece. Love “conjured bonds locking our true small hands/Lavish the secrets of your true small hands”
Thanks so much my dudes, this is a Duplex (Jericho Brown progenitor of the form). Poetry Foundation has the shindiggy on how to construct.
Basically what happens when a elements of a sonnet, ghazal and pantoum have orgiastic sex.
Lololololololol
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lol, best definition ever!
One of my favorites of yours. Love the last couplet.
Thank you Friend Brymer.r
Love the rhythm, form, and word choices.
Thank you Mike
Love the rhythm. The second stanza is arresting. The poem snaps. The shape the poem is really good too.
Thank you Queen Linda
You do the Duplex well!
love: clutches of bright set gold
conjured bonds locking our true small hands.
This one is fire!!! I love the way it builds up and pieces through the heart in such a beautiful way.
Beautiful. The black and gold weave themselves through so well.
And this form with the couplets, this duplex, I love, love. It’s new to me. But not for long.
Beautifully done duplex, weaving just the right phrases.