Upper Brush Creek
The creek in the upper brush sneaks closer to the valley
Nudging at clay and silt slowly wearing away it’s edges
A bright yellow backhoe carries large grey stone
To drop into a widening creek bed where a girl
The day before balanced on thin shale rock
Jumping one to one to one to cut across the low
Sitting creek and pull themselves up with a young birch
To find a new path through the valley
Though now asked to stay back
She stretches then takes a step closer
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Beautiful visual of the workings of a creek and the girl that “balanced on thin shale rock
jumping one to one to one” to explore.
You set a vivid, though disturbing scene very well in this poem.
I love this–the natural element and how the backhoe comes to alter the landscape, and the image of the girl stepping closer!
I love how this poem leaves me wanting more for what could happen next! Great write!