bluebird
in early morning
blue jay bird sits on railing
head in hot bright sun
body in crystalline shade
beak glistens head tilts eyes deep
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must be drinking your coffee wearing
nightvision glasses..
sky’s still pretty dark over here… 😉
Those “eyes deep” make the poem for me. Some birds just have them. Some people, too.
how is shade crystalline? that’s, now that’s something to ponder!
Pretty bird. <3
Beautiful snapshot poem, captured well.
favorite detail: the head tilt
your early morn poem
always gets the worm!!!
now i wonder tho… if this is for you…
from yesterday’s blue J etc.. (?)
And will echo again tomorrow.
I.love it when the exhalation starts making shapes.
Love it!
Delightful
I’d love to have this serene moment in a painting, well done!
Interesting how you stripped out all direct articles. Gives poem monotone that resonates. Well done.
Love crystalline shade…
You captued the bird!
beak glistens head tilts eyes deep
Most things are more intriguing in the morning.