Blueprints
Before the daughters,
she raised show dogs-
Afghan hounds,
royal sisters.
Kahandi was the eldest;
narrow- bodied,
always at attention with
clear and deep black eyes
focused forward, her
linear muzzle punctuated by
brunette locks, a
gifted learner, a
serious hunter, and
task mistress.
Kamikaze was golden like wheat,
with maximum fluff, a
stellar specimen of the breed,
a beautiful dimwit, with
smiling, distracted eyes, a
lover of all creatures,
she tried to learn commands but was
built for snuggling.
She trained them both,
loved them equally,
praised their qualities but
there was always
subtext- wishing the achiever was
more beautiful, or the
glamour girl more determined, or for
some method of combining the two into
one extraordinary contender.
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one extraordinary contender – yes!
I really like how you used the different font for each verse. That really accented the change in subject for each one.
I want to second the praise for the font change. Both dogs felt very alive and distinct from each other. This was a very pleasant read.
Thank you all for reading and commenting.
I loved the font change as well. My favorite phrase: “a beautiful dimwit, with smiling, distracted eyes,” Gorgeous!
“Wishing the achiever was more beautiful, or the glamour girl more determined”
Love this line!