Blurring the Color Palette
The woman thought of herself as drab,
empty space shaped
by objects around her, dwelt
inside the dove’s five note aria, deserving
of its melancholy until
one day she focused her gaze
on a female cardinal, watched how
this female preened
her subdued red feathers, how
this female was first at the feeder, alerting
her hungry blaze-of-scarlet male, how
this female chirped matins
to the earliest subtle light and
the woman felt her low-slung hum totter
from its nest in her belly, swell
upward in wingbeats of energy, burst
from her mouth in gorgeous notes
of gray.
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beautiful kathleen.
Lovely, those gorgeous notes of gray.
Yes! That ending sings.
So lovely!
Kathleen, this is a great coming-of-age poem!
Thanks for sharing this poem. Its song comes through loud and clear!
I love how inspiration is drawn giving over to song. Lovely.
Oh my! This is just so lovely and powerful. I love the image of her preening her subdued red. Well done.
Girl! Look what happens when you take a day off! Stunning from beginning to end.
Thanks everyone!
Love this. “her low-slung hum totter from its nest” wow!
Lush lush images of my favorite feeder visitor.
So many amazing lines here, but my favorite are:
…drab,
empty space shaped
by objects around her,
And
…her low-slung hum totter
from its nest in her belly, swell
upward in wingbeats of energy, burst
from her mouth in gorgeous notes
of gray.
Those words really resonate!
“gorgeous notes of gray” — love the phrase, so full of hope.