can i take your order please
a robin drifts
through the drive thru
blades of grass
tinkle
down as it speaks
answering the question
we all ask
at some point
usually after midnight
when moon
shines thru curtain
illuminates shadow
(thank goodness)
paints the wall
with an ashen
film noir pallet
until we fly
forward
past the world’s
pickup window
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“a Robin drifts through the drive thru blades of grass”
I really like that
Me too, that and:
answering the question we all ask
are my favorites.
Very visceral poem to me
Love “ashen/film noir pallet” Congratulations also on your forthcoming chapbook from Workhorse! I look forward to reading it, Allen.
love this image:
‘ when moon
shines thru curtain
illuminates shadow’
Love the way the single bird widens into us and the world–in this skinny poem.
Love the way the single bird widens into us and the world–in this skinny poem. Also love the title.
Thank you Libby!
I enjoyed this poem. It has painterly detail description
Thanks everybody!
like your title