Cicada Tanka Trio
At first I felt bad
when they pummeled my windshield,
a hundred red-eyed
lives I never meant to take
reduced to guts splashed on glass.
At the pool today,
kids in swimsuits shrieked and plunged
beneath the surface,
shook off small winged assailants
buzzing blindly at their heads.
I watched one sputter
on the water, no longer
caring if it died.
But a man reached in and plucked
it out – better man than I.
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Great cicada poem!
So vivid I’m scared to leave the house! “sputter” is a good word.
Might be my favourite cicada poem I’ve read this year! Vibrant imagery throughout this work
A sustained triple tanka about cicadas. Oh, my!
Ha, love the last line! We’ve been lucky where I am, haven’t seen a one.
Great cicada stack. The little guys are sangin love songs.
Great triple tanka work, chelsie!
I feel like Alfred Hitchcock could make a movie based on your poem! “Winged assailants” terrorizing the world lol.
Well done to form and images!
Terrific, Chelsie! Each one of them is good. Strung together they are perfection.
A great trio, you are a keen observer–even through the haze of cicadas!
This is great! I love the movement from “a hundred red-eyed
lives/I never meant to take” to the last tanka.
It’s like we are in Jumanji!!!