Cigarette
I. He always tucks two
in the black acrylic ankle
sock on his right leg.
II. Spit sizzles from his
lips as he presses
smouldering ash
against his tongue.
III. She use her index
finger to trace the perfect
circle embeded on her left
wrist every time she imagines
leaving.
IV. Torn into two pieces
bobbing in his warm beer.
V. She feels the strike of
the match beneath her breast.
18 thoughts on "Cigarette"
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Powerful. Such an intense drama here, yet implied with such elegant restraint. Bravo.
Wow, Wendy! Those images sizzle!
I love the contrast with the profile pic 😂
Says so much – torn in two as she feels the match strike under her breast.
I love this
trace the perfect circle.. very nice
Such imagery, Wendy! And that last line, wow!
A masterful “dark side” poem! Part III is the heart. Thanks.
Tragic and excellent!
Hard subject matter. You’ve delivered it with a masterful touch. I love the form of the poem too!
I love how you centered this poem on the cigarette as the vehicle to tell this difficult story.
So glad to have Wendy words to sizzle the waves in my brain this month! Nice progression of images.
Another powerful poem!
Wow, Wendy. Powerful.
the “perfect circle” – so chilling and just says it all. Masterful!
Powerful and beautiful.
Powerful intensity without a word
Images carry me through, allow me in the room