Cloud-bursts into-Summer
Far away thunder echoes
from the rockface.
A strong gale bellows
up the hill from the lake-
Forest crown roaring-
Yet, here perfect-
stillness is a small Finch-bright yellow-
chirping at it’s reflection in an old Oak
against a gray pewter polished sky.
When the first drops, wet-cold
of rain find this dim-lit holy hold-
through the dark leather green
not yet summer pale shrunken leaves
it becomes clear.
This sound-
was-is-will be, cannot be, isn’t wind-
That is not wind.
This is a summer monsoon, come early
Heavy thick and pounding up the mountain
-rock by rock-
Heavy thick and pounding up the mountain
-rock by rock-
Clouds, bruised shadow violet veils
pour out weight onto the overstory
with the force of a rope lifted wood pail
filled to the -lip- with water, then cast
with force by the hand of a butcher to wash
-blood from block-
filled to the -lip- with water, then cast
with force by the hand of a butcher to wash
-blood from block-
Everything is gone, it’s
gone, they are gone: bird, reflection
moment,
gone.
Rain stops rain. Leaves are still and splayed-
in the brilliant sudden sun.
A quick -shifty breeze- canters through
like a muppet, rattling everything
in the just washed brand new summer.
Chunky drips drop into the duff like they mean it.
I am soaked
slow-muddy river-baptism wet and laughing and-
smiling saying-yes, oh so yesingly yes-
laughing.
Holding four full pages of notes-
I can barely read.
-And a pen-
13 thoughts on "Cloud-bursts into-Summer"
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i know this kinds of rain exactly.
next up.. mushrooms!!
great description, I was with you all the way, and wonderful ending
The writing puts the reader right in place, and you immerse us, too.
I could enumerate the cool things in each line but that would take longer than the cloud burst itself,
the best thing: you in it
I like your use of white space in “That is not wind.”
Masterful, a comment on poetic inspiration, the rush and force when it comes. So many wonderful lines and images – “with force by the hand of a butcher to wash/
-blood from block-” – took my breath away.
Bill, I’m going to whisper this because it is nice to rest in the suspension of this really happening. Since you know. ” drunk on an elixir never brewed ” ….4 full pages……monsoon.
Sorry, I mistranslated 🙂 “I taste an elixir never brewed”
Lol…” liquor”
Oh you debauchee of dew, you.
Love this, especially the meta touch at the end. Your e.e. cummings side is coming out here …
So glad you caught that 🙂
you had me at finches. they are the sweetest. so much to loove here /// everything is gone, it’s // gone — I concur with Kevin.