Cloud Haiku
Clouds transform to fluffy
mammals and romp wildly
like kids before bed.
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Clouds transform to fluffy
mammals and romp wildly
like kids before bed.
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i could read cloud haiku poems all day.
That’s not a bad idea!
Love the tension the break at fluffy creates, and the pay off is spot on. Delightful haiku.
wonderful, evocative, great. Covers a lot of ground with few words
OK so this is so badass….lol…sorry but that’s the only way I can say it.
The wispy kigo is so barely there.
It has the “ya” perfectly stuck
An almost twined haiku and senryu
…..walkin on rice paper darlin.
thanks for describing
this sunset scene
it was the same here
and you caught it
Both clouds and children with their ever playing nature!
This took me to: Where the Wild Things Are!