Black coffee
3:00 AM.
Spent night / for us / in this damp,
everyone could smell each other.
There was / hanging / on the wind
a scent, a black seaweed
whipping / around / the peninsula.
The alligator gods of Florida, watching openly.
Planted
with leprous bark / encrusted / and eyes
winking in the headlights,
only disturbed to disquiet
if we came / close / — their sacrifices.
My father / was / driving.
I sat / behind him / in the blue VW.
Six years old / I was / along for the ride.
I thought / was / my dad lonely–
Had his all been mellow scotches and / happy / wines?
He was playing drums on the wheel
to stay awake.
3:01 AM.
Fourteen hours / to / Orlando.
A cup of / black / coffee / was / all he wanted,
and he began to stop everywhere.
There wasn’t / a truck stop with / coffee
ready to go,
none anyone would make.
I began to cry. Coffee was priceless.
*style modeled after the manner of Etheridge Knight
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Steinbeckian tip of the iceberg here.
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well thank you friend Joseph. such never occurred to me.
I really enjoyed this poem.
Thank you Shaun 😎
This line made me linger longer …
“The alligator gods of Florida, watching openly.”
Kevin
They’re coming for us Kevin. 🤪
It still is priceless! Delicious style and images –
So much to love – “leprous bark” and “a black seaweed/whipping.” Swoon-worthy.
Swoon-worthy! Well I’ll be John Brown!
Etheridge Knight is a good one to bounce off of! I am haunted by the line:
He was playing drums on the wheel
to stay awake.
You crying at the end feels natural release for the poem.
I love Etheridge, have ever since I read him. His prison haiku, where natural settings are replaced by prison as nature of place, astound me. The memory of my father at the wheel that night haunts me too.💔
There’s something about 3Am.
It is the very witching time of night when church yards yawn and hell itself breathes out contagion. Something like that.