Commencement Address
Now that you’ve graduated,
walk into a bar full of nuns,
cockroaches, and dragons.
Realize that this is no joke.
Realize it’s a classroom, not a bar.
Order a round for the house anyhow.
Learn from everyone.
Change habits.
Outlive the next war.
Breathe fire.
Don’t take advice from anyone, poets especially,
but stay humble and open-minded.
If asked to give a commencement address,
keep it short
and don’t make it about yourself.
Let joy inflict you.
Choose wanderlust.
Do cartwheels or fly in circles.
Waltz like a shy sunbeam
crawling across a wall
in search of a window to climb through.
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Love “Don’t take advice from anyone, poets especially” – great imperatives throughout and I am sufficiently inspired to waltz like a crazy sunbeam. Thank you for this!
Thanks Liz.
I love everything about this, from the way you bring back the dragons from line three with the command “breathe fire” to your imagery of a waltzing, “shy sunbeam.” Wanderlust is one of my favorite words, so I also appreciate your use of it in the poem; it is the perfect way to describe life after graduation. Thank you for your wonderful poem and sage advice!
Thanks Katrina!
I love the tone and humor of this. And also the advice!
Thanks Jasmine.
Let joy inflict you.
I love this unusual verb choice!
Thank you!
This is just wonderful! But sadly I am not going to take your advice and might just use this poem as a mentor text as this is a theme I’ve wanted to explore.
Thanks Deanna. What’s a mentor text?
Tom – You have a way of luring me into a poem and not letting go until you spit me out at the end – dizzy and totally amazed. It has a taste of The Graduate, but tons more imagination.
Thanks so much, Sylvia. The Graduate is great.
Love these free-spirited directives