Commuting in the Anthroposcene
One windshield wiper slapped air,
rain so heavy it fell in blinding buckets.
The one dirt road, a minefield of potholes.
Through literal rivers, foolish and young,
in a car so light, a stiff breeze shook the roof.
In the rain and dark, we drove close to each other,
illuminated by dashboards and taillights, clutching
our wheels–eyes fixed ahead on the long path home.
It wasn’t til we’d passed the storm, south and east,
where the hills I love cut the thunderhead down.
28 thoughts on "Commuting in the Anthroposcene"
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Wow. I’m there absolute.
Whipped in storm and time from foolishness youth and the 65 and water throughout.
A bit more than a poem, an experience.
Thank you!
weeping valley
bare air
(in) buckets
wonderful.
Thanks, Dustin.
Wow this is just beautiful, wonderful details creating those ill-advised situations. This is tight.
Thank you, Bill!
Detailed and rooted in home. Well done as always Shaun.
Thank you, Allen!
In the rain and dark, we drove close to each other,
illuminated by dashboards and taillights, clutching
our wheels–eyes fixed ahead on the long path home.
love this turn
Thanks, Manny!
Sub sandwiches in a blizzard?? Indestructible in youth but nature will have its way with us. Very accessible poem with a brilliant last line. Great read, Shaun!
The subs in the blizzard were a terrible idea! But the story is still good. Thanks, Sylvia!
Shoot that last stanza sounds like life. Nicely done!
Thank you, Arwen!
Man! What a line!
geological eras bisected bare.
Thanks, Pam!
You got me with the first 2 lines!
Thanks, Linda! It always surprises me how close groundwater is to the surface on 64 around Frankfort
I like everything, especially the title. The current issue of Orion magazine is titled “40 Origin Stories for the Anthropocene”…..yours makes 41.
Thanks, Jim!
I so love that last line!
Thank you, Roberta!
I especially liked “geological eras bisected bare” & ” the hills I love cut the thunderhead down.” What an ending!
Thanks, Karen!
The imagery is lovely — great work!
Thank you, Maira!
So many miles in one poem. A very nice read!
lovely