Curly Hair
As a child my hair was ruler-straight.
I saw the curly-headed ones as blessed,
some special stock made them fancier,
their tops enhanced with twirls
and curls, a crown of fortune
enfolded them. Somehow they were
God’s beloved, beings with halos
of favor.
And now, miraculously, late
in life, from my own top,
these twirling tresses, curving
and curling enveloping my skull
with a blessing—adornment
to make royalty weep.
My inner child stunned
and unbelieving, I touch
my hair shyly, stroke it
just to be sure it’s true.
I’ve gone from plain Jane
to runway model.
13 thoughts on "Curly Hair"
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Loved this internal dialog especially last 2 lines.
Thanks Linda, It was fun to write!
I really like this, and you have always been a runway model, it just took you this long to realize it!
Ha!
I love this line: beings with halos
of favor. It captures the feelings of how it feels to be on the outside. Also, touch my hair–still the disbelief! Lovely.
Thanks for your acute insight, Geri
I especially love the last stanza. And another well made poem, Thank you, my poet friend.
Smiles of gratitude and thanks, Bev
Love that middle stanza and the message of self-acceptance in this.
Thanks for getting the gist
Never say never! My curls started at age 18 and they get more and more curly by the decade!!!! I love it—no work, all play! Fun poem pat
Thanks Kim, glad you could see the fun
I love the phrase “a crown of fortune.”
I also wanted curly hair as a child. Still want it too. Now I wrestle with a curling rod to get it.
I love this poem!