Daily
Daily
They make an odd couple,
brother- and sister-in-law,
a nuclear family with no
further branching.
One does a rich rocking
motion to get out of a chair,
waddles to the mail box,
carries in the groceries
he cannot see. The other shuffles
across the kitchen floor,
dragging her bad leg
in order to serve a meal, leaning
in to avoid the last few steps,
sliding the plate halfway on to
the table with her finger tips.
The light is dim, life
fragmenting. Church
on days they feel up
to an outing, a drive
by the graveyard. A couple
of neighbors check in
periodically; a guy mows
the lawn. No more secrets
to be made, only silence
moving in; silence and more
sleeping. No more turning
stones to find happiness—
what happiness they have
they have to make.
Melva Sue Priddy
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Wow. What an ending. This poem is somber with so many other undercurrents of emotion. So well done.
Every scenario in this…… moving!
Sad.
An honest description of aging. “life fragmenting”, “silence moving in” – these phrases are bleak, but the poem gives me the feeling that the couple accepts this phase of their life. At least they have each other and they do the best they can. Very tender! Well written!
This poems makes me just want to get older and older. I am now in a state of anxious anticipation to see if I only drag one leg.
Aging is so much fun and I am so glad to have such good poetry to keep me company, and poets, too.
Good poem.
Don’t think I can add
anything more pertinent
than Cathy’s comment,
or funnier!