dance away
i felt you feel me
across the
galaxy
we tried to make
a way
i turned left
you turned right
i spun up
you spun down
your joy means
my pain
my hope means
your fear
shared vibration
entangled
collapse
again
6 thoughts on "dance away"
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Love this poem, love the title, love those opening lines setting the tone. Great work.
thank you!
“entangled collapse” will be the phrase that will dance in my head today … so lovely, the way you used your phrasings here to create the rhythm of emotions.
Kevin
thank you!
Love the short, concise lines & simple language describing a complicated matter. But then you throw in “entangled” and “collapse” – just to keep us on our toes!!! So good!!
thank you so much!