Dark as a Dungeon
The days were long, but money mattered,
fifty cents a day helped keep us all fed,
so schooling wasn’t really a question.
I was nine when this picture was taken,
and, yeah, I really smoked that pipe,
carried that pickaxe, the whole thing.
My day started before the sun was fully up,
so I went from darkness to darkness,
no different than the pit ponies I loved.
Back and forth, cleaning up after them,
sniffing the air for gas, carrying dynamite,
the work was hard, but not like the miners’.
At eighteen, I joined the Marines, hard work
I’d trained for since I was a little pit boy,
earned my way up through the ranks fast.
In ‘24, somebody got careless, so bad
everyone on that shift was blown apart,
just like that mortar did me in the Belleau.
(after the circa-1900 photograph captioned,
“Unidentified child, probably at Castle Gate,
Finlander — 9 years old. He worked in the
Castle Gate Mine near the turn of the century.
He carried explosives and searched for “Bad
Air” and cleaned entries from animal debris
and loose coal.”, in the collection of the Utah
State Historical Society; and after the 1946
song lyrics, “Dark as a Dungeon,” by Merle
Travis)
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Hard to imagine what some children went through! Well done with this poem! Have you heard “Dark as a Dungeon” sung by John Cowan and Sam Bush?
A lit of children still go through hard manual labor. In 2022 Afghanistan, for example, child labor paid a princely $3 a day.
I’m more familiar with the Belafonte and Ford covers, so I’ll look up Cowan and Bush.
Great poem to go with the Travis song. I enjoyed how you give a voice of experience to the nameless boy.
Thank you, Shaun. I first heard Belafonte sing the song in ‘60 or ‘61. The version on that particular album accidentally included the sound of sirens from the street. Chilling.
Nameless, yes, but also Legion, both as pit boy and grunt. I’m a Nam vet, and can empathize my way into a lot of voices.
love this poem, (v. dark ties) and that song. (freakwater version)
Thank you!