Death Throes
For almost a month
I’ve
been
look-
ing
up
to
see
buds
emerge
ever
so
slowly.
But yesterday my brother pulled my gaze downward
to the century plant’s deathbed
as from inside out
from stems to spikes
it sighs in husks
like parchment
spent and spiny.
All its vitality now
speeds skyward
to fingers
splayed
to grasp toward heaven and a pledge of life
while far far below
still jealous in its guard
it will not suffer
what comfort
I might
offer.
I might offer.
8 thoughts on "Death Throes"
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Wow! Love this:
it sighs in husks
like parchment
spent and spiny.
Such a beautiful poem about way more than the plant. Thank you.
Every single line is beautiful.
I agree with Roberta about those three beautiful lines. It’s a lovely contemplative poem.
I’m also a huge fan of those three lines, absolutely gorgeous imagery and language!
Thanks all!
Beautifully crafted in words and shape.
Agree with others on the these lines:
it sighs in husks
like parchment
spent and spiny.
and add these:
speeds skyward
to fingers
splayed
Love the form and the life lesson!
Beautiful work!! I love how this poem lives on the page. So many gorgeous lines. I found the repetition of “I might offer” at the end so poignant.