DELIVERANCE
Standing there waiting
in dull red worn jeans
pale mustard shabby sweater
flip-flops in February
leaning against the pale wall
clutching her violin case
she stares
The Childrens’ Conductor
comes forward
with “Get your fiddles out.”
The young girl
perhaps eleven
with hair lighter and duller
than her sweater
looks around
no expression on her face
Picking up her instrument
out of its case
she takes her place
joins the others
in this fiddle choir
Front and center
she does not change her gaze
at the adult’s washboard accompaniment
and bass broom with strings
set in washtub for reverbs
Chilly in the shade
under the canopy
of the community center
with children herded to warmest wall
to play in a staggered line
No excitement in their faces
On cue they pick
up their bows
and fiddle.
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Great detail! I really enjoyed this.
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I love the potential energy that builds through this poem, all leading to that last stanza, where the energy is released in the reader’s imagination.
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Mystery and suggestiveness in title
a chill in final stanza
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Really drew me in, I enjoyed the movement!
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