Desire, received:
If you hunger for
me, let yourself feel that some
before the tasting.
Like celestial
orbs, there’s no devouring me
in just one mouthful.
I am best savoured
with a slow drink; on soft tongue
a languid banquet.
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Intimate and inviting. Absolutely gorgeous.
“there’s no devouring me in just one mouthful” – wonderful image, gorgeous writing
This captures the essence of longing in a delicate and sophisticated manner, nice write!
Did you just rock a tanka, my dearest friend?
Loving the luscious images!
Great first poem of the year!
I love the push and pull of desire you captured. Powerful!
Thanks, y’all! 💜