Did Wedding Fish Escape?
Advice becomes
among cottage-knackers.
Thereupon, courage knocks.
A robber, strange,
seeks Rose-Red
country minutes.
Stronger, courtyard-taking
Wolf presents
house-building spindle.
Midnight: man wishes mouse present.
She was.
Upon hedgehog (seized),
Old-Woman steps
hard manners.
Did wedding fish escape
impoverished King’s daughter?
Perhaps.
Straw-Foot passes.
Night watch.
Little servant eats.
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Feels composed of bits of fairy tales, a surrealist Dali landscape.
I agree with Gaby. And very structured. Great work!
Is this a sly comment on the current state of affairs of TV mini-series & the rendering of dead horses,i.e. politics? Or just a Wild Guest
Wedding fish always make me sad. Glad someone else has noticed them.
– – -Bruce, also born in Cincy, lived in
Paris. Wonder if that genesis hurts or
helps . . .