dream one: a prose poem TRIGGER WARNING: death of an adult child
dream one: a prose poem
you visited my dream. stood in the kitchen plundering the cabinets, found a pack of ramen, and asked, can i have this? dry chicken flavored noodles hung limp in your hand. confused i think, but you are dead, yet there you were, grinning wide, shaking your dreadlocked head at the statement i never said. you look at me, love like a small child’s in your eyes. but you were quiet as a tomb. i had one question. i asked you, “are you here?”
you, my boy whose ashes sweep the depths beneath the gown of a waterfall. my now sleeping, never waking, slumber taken boy. are you here? i reached for you, but you had passed. way beyond my grasp.
you strolled down the hall, ignoring your brother on the sofa, and i, as desolate as a burial ground, asked my only living son if you’re here. but he was silent, so i rushed behind you, not ready to lose you once again. “are you here?” the words chase you down, but they faded in the air, and like a last breath they were gone.
i could not get to you, so close. you’re weren’t even a ghost, headed to your sister’s room. that endless hall. how many miles long? you were out of my reach, you, looking solid like a rock of a boy, thrown to a shore far away from me. “is he here?” i asked your sister. but she was quiet as death. then you were gone.
i bolted awake, bursting through the sepulcher of sleep, my hand flying to my racing heart. this gesture of a mother bereft who has lost her son, even in her dreams.
and you were not here.
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This is powerful – the repetition and language give it a beauty and despair. The phrase “slumber taken boy” hit me the hardest
Thank you. That part gets me every time, too. ❤️
I agree with Ariana. Powerful writing and language that pulls the reader right into the story and carries us with you.
Thank you. ❤️
Beautiful piece, full of sadness and longing. It raises the question: are these encounters with our phantom loved ones a kind of haunting, or our way of keeping them with us just a bit longer? I’m guessing both.
It definitely felt like a visitation. Thanks, Kevin.❤️
Beautifully written, heart wrenching poem. <3
Thank you. ❤️
Really great writing. Form is perfect. It almost feels insensitive to praise this painful recounting in this way but I love how each reply is compared to some form of death. Really hits your emotions home to me. Highest praise and deepest sympathies for your loss
Thank you so much. ❤️ That’s really is exactly what I dreamed. Didn’t have to make it up at all, just make it work as a prose poem.
You had me at “are you here,” and finished me off “is he here.” Powerful. I’m sorry for your loss.
Thank you. ❤️