dribble and chitan: an epiphany
1. (tricube)
if the tank
seems empty,
use structure
to siphon
out meaning–
remember!
it will surge–
spit out the
first dribble
2.
I turned to form
to force surprise
from writing–
but I was all husk,
hollowed out by bells
and schedules,
scratching chitan.
I scrap structure,
and there is wonder
how
with freedom
the words morph
into
Invitation to Big Change:
Oh, to quit this dysfunctional system!
and discover
who next I will become.
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Nice work.
As we move into the last stages of this project it is wonderful to see what it squeezes out of our empty tank.
A very good poem that looks good and rings true .
Thank you for sharing this one.
Thank you, Coleman!
Yes yes & yes
(espesh: the dysfunctional system)
Very nice. The form works so well😉