Drip Rock, Summer of 2009
We were three girls creek bathing
in our shorts and tank tops,
barefoot along the creek bottom rocks.
Shampoo bubbles in ocean scent
mixed with murky storm runoff.
Our bodies washed clean
as our parents’ laughter faded,
rolled between the shared blunt
of their lips.
We took turns
washing one another’s hair.
Placed our hands
under the small of our backs.
We learned to float
as the dirt rinsed away.
We taught each other how to be brave
enough to jump off Drip Rock.
We taught each other when our feet hit
rock bottom, to push off strong.
And kick, and kick, and kick.
Until our faces met
the cold water’s surface.
Hot sun and breeze caught our breath,
splashed our wide, hungry mouths.
The wind carried our slim emptiness
back to Mama and Daddy, who slept
with their sunburn and alcohol.
Our six little feet
dipped into the water’s edge.
A single bag of shared chips
passed between us.
Stoneroller minnows nibbled the crumbs
between our quiet smiles.
Us girls—
we kept each other safe.
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This poem makes me simultaneously sad and joyful. It’s an ode to sisterhood and how that bond can make a difference.
Yes, exactly!
Blessed Sisterhood!
Love:
Our six little feet
dipped into the water’s edge.
A single bag of shared chips
passed between us.
and this powerful ending to an incredible poem:
Us girls—
we kept each other safe.
Thank you, Pam! Happy you enjoyed.
This has wonderful details, descriptions and a sense of place. I particularly love the third stanza but I like all of it. Good good metaphors too, such as the shared bag of chips. Wonderful job.
Thank you so much! I enjoy that stanza as well.
I can picture those six little feet, wet, cold, splashing; and the shared bag of salty, crumbling chips.
I love it!
Makes me wish I was your sister. This is a beautifully written poem that says more to your soul than it does to your ears. The weave of feelings is artistic.
You have wonderful imagery in this poem.