Driving Home After a Movie, Turning a Certain Curve in the Road
I knew my life about to change;
some things would be left behind.
I packed the suitcases of my brain,
and mused, my life’s about to change.
Girl, it’s time you thought long-range.
No longer resigned and undermined.
I whispered, “My life will change.
It’s time my values and actions aligned.”
Roadside wildflowers swayed, unconfined.
I told him, “My life’s about to change.
You catch up fast or be left behind.”
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Wow! I love titles, and this is wonderful! That moment when things can change. “I packed the suitcases of my brain” – yes you did!
Thanks!
“No longer resigned and undermined” is a home run for me. And those roadside wildflowers, perfect.
Thanks!
What form is this in? It looks similar to a rondel or triolet.
It’s similar to a triolet, extended.
Awesome!
Title invited me in. Love:
No longer resigned and undermined.
Thanks.