Driving in the South
a sign beside the highway reads:
SAY THIS:
JESUS FORGIVE MY SINS
SAVE MY SOUL
and I am sad.
What good is regurgitation?
What bloom has ever opened
to shame instead of light?
Why can it not, instead, instruct us to:
BEHOLD
the miracle of pencil-thin pines
reaching skyward with straight backs,
arms raised, dropping
strange, wonderful seeds
to the grass below.
WATCH
the sun appear,
a bright fish between clouds
that bunch and roll, churning
like crests of waves in a stark sea
of heavenly blue.
LET YOUR SOUL BE MOVED
first, and maybe you will see
that love made all of this
and you, too. Even if you don’t
believe it, when the rain falls,
it still washes over you.
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Top to bottom wonderful.
Concept immaculate.
Truth.
Yes, I drive the same drives and ask the same kinds of questions. I love this.
We’re on the same wavelength this morning, Chelsie. So many wonderful lines.
I mirror everyone’s comments and thoughts. Yes! Behold churning like crests of waves in a stark sea of heavenly blue.
WOW and I say it everyday when I look at the rising sun and the carpets of green, and horses and cattle spread out over the land I see and I feel love and my soul is moved and I think and wonder why don’t doctors prescribe what I live and see daily as therapy.
love how you structured the poem
Yes to this poem, especially: “What bloom has ever opened/to shame instead of light?”