Editorial Comment
When my subconscious squeezes
regret into a dream so that it drips
onto the pages of the magazine
I once edited. Two pages with pink
ink bleeding on all edges, and then
a celebration of the pope—posed
from behind, anonymous. I rush
to show the Scholar, hoping his
sympathy for things institutional
will comfort. But now, there’s page
after page of pictures, columns of
comment, a maze of coverage—
but no pink, no bad photo. Regret
has leached out, leaving me to wake
wondering when it will all go away.
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Dreams are such good content for poems. This is a great example of a situation we reach the point of knowing what “too much” looks like.
I like how the poem is framed with the subordinate clause of the opening completed by the main clause of the closing.
Agreed! I think this adds to a sense of unease that is remedied by the catharsis of the ending dream/ending lines!
“When my subconscious squeezes
regret into a dream” – great opening to the poem. Love the title, humor, and truth all rolled into a good read!
love the sound and movement in:
subconscious squeezes/regret
and in:
Regret/has leached out
Oooohhhhh. The specifics may differ, but I suspect most folks (including myself) understand this. I have some extremely burdensome regrets. At 72, they don’t seem to be going anywhere.
Thank you for sharing this!
You captured that waking with a disturbing dream — unable to shake it off — so well. Your “subconscious squeezes / regret” is a fantastic phrase and image! That last line, perfect. (and all those in between 🙂