end of breath
with eyes up there
to see
your wings
in command
of
thermal
sleeves
upward rising-
shifting struggle
of
escaping
air-
the floating total
in glorious glide.
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Oh those last two lines!! Glorious glide. Superb!
With your upward floating
Wow.
I really enjoyed the use of form here!
Ooo! I read the title like a separate observation. I like that!
Both are great